Communications Review

$225.00

Get a fresh set of eyes.
Sometimes you are just too close to the words. You know your mission inside and out, but you wonder: Does this land? Will our community understand why this matters? Could this be sharper?

That is where a Communications Review comes in.

Get a fresh set of eyes.
Sometimes you are just too close to the words. You know your mission inside and out, but you wonder: Does this land? Will our community understand why this matters? Could this be sharper?

That is where a Communications Review comes in.

What to Expect:

  • You send me a Google Doc draft of any communication from your organization (under 12 pages)

  • I’ll review it, making comments and suggestions directly in the document.

  • You’ll receive detailed, actionable feedback you can implement right away!

What You’ll Get:

  • Your draft returned in Google Docs with comments and suggested edits throughout.

  • A clear summary of what is working, what is confusing, and what could be stronger.

  • A week of Voxer support, - Voxer is a free voice messaging app, kind of like a walkie-talkie. You can send me questions, bounce ideas, and test revisions, and I’ll respond within 24 hours. It’s like having an extra staff person in your pocket for the week.

Why It Matters:

When your words feel confusing or generic, your community hesitates. When your words feel authentic and powerful, they listen.

This review is a way to bridge that gap without hiring a writer or launching a big project. You keep ownership of your message, while I give you the insight and tweaks that help it land.

How I Support:

  • Over the past couple decades, I’ve helped dozens of nonprofits raise more money by writing and reviewing appeals, campaigns, and donor messages. My approach is plainspoken, practical, and rooted in what resonates.

What People Are Saying:

“Wow! You knocked it out of the park! I am so thrilled about this letter. It is spot on.....one I can feel very proud to send out to our donor base and new prospects. With such a fantastic letter I am really going to advocate for a much larger mailing list than last year. ” - Lisa Martin, American Precision Museum